THE PERSON
OF THE YEAR
Here I am
as a jury member, and I am asked to choose a person who is the person of the
year. My choice is Johnny Depp, and I have very strong reason behind my choice.
Firstly, he is the person who has the most fans in the world. He also has been
nominated for top awards many times, winning the Best Actor Awards. He is a charitable
person. He donated 2 million dollars to the hospital where his daughter was
treated.
I want to
share his early times with you. When he was 15 he set a music group and quitted
the school. He met the sister of his group’s vocalist Lori Anne Allison, and he
married with her. She was the make-up artist of the Hollywood films’ actor. She
introduced Johnny with Nicolas Cage. He said Johnny that he had very nice face,
he should take a role in films. He took a role since he just wanted to pay his
bills. This is the first step of his career. Then he began to show up in films.

After playing a TV series, he became very popular among the young girls, every magazine journal had his photos on. He was annoyed to be in the limelight, so he wanted to be play weird characters in movies. After meeting Tim Burton he began to take role in weird characters. The other producers criticized his weird character. However his success in Pirates of the Caribbean misled them. Now he is the most gaining actor in Hollywood.

After playing a TV series, he became very popular among the young girls, every magazine journal had his photos on. He was annoyed to be in the limelight, so he wanted to be play weird characters in movies. After meeting Tim Burton he began to take role in weird characters. The other producers criticized his weird character. However his success in Pirates of the Caribbean misled them. Now he is the most gaining actor in Hollywood.


Dear Mate!
YanıtlaSilFirstly, I like your way of explaining the subject very much. You have stated why you chose Johnny Deep explicitly. In fact, you have provided a lot of detail about the artist, and this makes me extremely happy. Because I love Johnny Deep very much, too. Also you have provided information about his early years, which I did not know so much. Also, your pictures are related to the topic. Moreover, by using paragraphs you made easier for us to read your entry :) From grammatical aspect, you should revise the line 9 ( a TV series) in terms of plural/singular noun usage. All in all, I am sure that I will read your next entries with the same pleasure.